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I'm yours,
forever yours.
Yours to adore,
like never before.
I'll make you smile,
for quite a while.
I'll hold you close,
and treasure you most.
I'll hold your hand,
you'll understand.
When I have to go,
I'll just say no.
I'll stay with you,
when it's all through.
You're mine to keep,
I'll never sleep.
I'll always be near,
you won't need fear.
It'll just be you & me,
for a day + eternity.
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You looked to me,
thought I'd set you free,
that may be true, but your love is the key.
And I'm truly sorry,
but my service ain't free,
your heart is the cost of my intimacy.
Bigger than the sun,
more than the sea,
our love destroys all, and then the debris.
You're mine for life,
for eternity,
I'll do anything, if you just let me.
While it's no guarantee
(and you may disagree),
I'll give everything up, and all just to see...
You!
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©2001-2009 ~mattmacd
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Story behind these... a year ago, I was in love with a girl, and I wrote these two poems. Now, that all pretty much fell apart, and I now realise how blind love can be...
The question I find myself asking: was the creativity put into these poems wasted? Does the fact that both of them are addressed to someone who doesn't deserve them mean that they don't mean anything anymore? Or are they just a part of my past, not to look down on, but to admire?
And a more important question: do these poems make you cringe as well?
The question I find myself asking: was the creativity put into these poems wasted? Does the fact that both of them are addressed to someone who doesn't deserve them mean that they don't mean anything anymore? Or are they just a part of my past, not to look down on, but to admire?
And a more important question: do these poems make you cringe as well?
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